I am a Year 5 student in Team Moana at Ohaeawai School in Northland, New Zealand.
I like the way you used words to describe how the Easter egg tasted and melted in your mouth. The facts you have used are really good. I like how you described where you found the eggs. Were all the Easter eggs outside in your garden?
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I like the way you used words to describe how the Easter egg tasted and melted in your mouth. The facts you have used are really good. I like how you described where you found the eggs. Were all the Easter eggs outside in your garden?
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